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Just above the clouds,
at 500 mph —
the stars do not move
A haiku written for #the-haiku-club's 2011 Tanabata Contest.

I will be flying soon, hopefully with stars just outside my reach.
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Lupina24 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
With opposites of motion and stillness creating a tranquil moment that is captured so well here. Well done, well done indeed.
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somnomollior Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011   Writer
I love the combination of speed and stillness. I feel a moment of hush and suspension in time.
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saiun Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2011
Accepted for the Haiku Club's 2011 Tanabata Contest! Make sure to check out the other entries and our contest history as well.

Good luck and consider participating in our other active events. =D


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almcdermid Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Professional Writer
I like the perspective.
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